If someone asks me: "Who do you want to become in the future?", I answer : "I want to become a football star. Because I love football, I can control a ball precisely and do many things with the ball such as keeping the balanced ball not dropping , "dancing with the ball"...Football brings me both happiness and sadness. Because I and my friends always play football together , share a good match and make more acquaintances some friends in friendly match on sands. But many injuries make me not come ground whereas my friends can play. Football does teach me not only about team spirit but also patience ,enthusiasm in each practices and competition, and people an idiom:"Everything will come who waits". If I became a professional player , I have many opportunities to go many places and abroad like Cong Vinh .There,I could learn many things about people,tradition,customs , especially football style of each country and meet many football stars.Maybe I could play for top of clubs in Europe.When I retire, I establish a football center where many young talent player are trained by qualified coaches and completely free tuition after being chosen carefully through competition.And they will be the future of Vietnamese football to claim the strengh in country and internation.Athough I can't become an excellent player , I still keep my love with the ball.And I always attempt to achieve the success in my life.
Thứ Tư, 28 tháng 10, 2009
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to be honest,i hate football but after read this essay,i'm not anymore.LOL.your grammar is amazing!!!but you should add more "the,a, some..." it would be perfect.
Trả lờiXóa-"make be acquainted some friends in friendly match on sands".i could hardly understand this sentence,i think you should fix it "have more acquaintances through friendly matches on the sand".
Trả lờiXóa-"Athough I can't become a excellent": "although i couldn't become an excellent..."
-you should use "would" instead of "will","could" instead of "can" in the final paragraph because it's just the imagination,it's not real in this moment.
-there are some simple structures you made wrong but it's not important.
fix me if i'm wrong.thanks.bless you!
Trả lờiXóahey Nhan,I am really impressed by your vocabularies and grammar although there are many phrases i don't understand. Like Nhi, I don't understand " make be acquainted some friends in friendly match on sands". But I have a problem with you. This just say about your dream without mention who you wnt to be in the future. Forgive me if I'm wrong !!!(^_^)
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